In hind sight, her waist is a little too thin. Sadamoto tends to do that, and I'd been looking at his work all day prior to drawing this. That might be why :P I don't mind critiques at all, that's how we get better.
As for the progress of my manga: I've got all of my character designs done, and most of the arcs planned out. I just need to sit down and start writing a script so that I know what I'm drawing ahead of time XD
Very nice! I like the pose, and you did well with the shading. I think her waist is a little on the thin side though. I know this is a stylised drawing, but it looks to me as though she is wearing a corset. Her waist juts in then out sharply so it doesn't look quite natural.
I hope you don't mind me saying so!
I do like the shape of her legs though, and her hand ^^
Inphinity
Hopeless Romantic (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/20/13 | Reply
@Kaerlyn:
In hind sight, her waist is a little too thin. Sadamoto tends to do that, and I'd been looking at his work all day prior to drawing this. That might be why :P I don't mind critiques at all, that's how we get better.
As for the progress of my manga: I've got all of my character designs done, and most of the arcs planned out. I just need to sit down and start writing a script so that I know what I'm drawing ahead of time XD
Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/20/13 | Reply
Very nice! I like the pose, and you did well with the shading. I think her waist is a little on the thin side though. I know this is a stylised drawing, but it looks to me as though she is wearing a corset. Her waist juts in then out sharply so it doesn't look quite natural.
I hope you don't mind me saying so!
I do like the shape of her legs though, and her hand ^^
How much of your manga have you completed?