Very nice layout, but there are problems. The hands look funky, especially when wrapped around something. Her face looks squashed compared to the rest of her body's anatomy. The one direction of her feet don't really match the curve of her body, making her stance look awkward.
But, like I said, I really like layout. If those problems weren't there, it would be an even more fabulous picture to look at.
Last edited by lunesoldier20 at 1:05:54 PM EDT on August 7, 2012.
Heartkruez
UndercoverNinja (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/07/12 | Reply
@lunesoldier20:
*sucks at hands and feet* Thanks! I'll work on that.
lunesoldier20
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/07/12 | Reply
Very nice layout, but there are problems. The hands look funky, especially when wrapped around something. Her face looks squashed compared to the rest of her body's anatomy. The one direction of her feet don't really match the curve of her body, making her stance look awkward.
But, like I said, I really like layout. If those problems weren't there, it would be an even more fabulous picture to look at.
Last edited by lunesoldier20 at 1:05:54 PM EDT on August 7, 2012.
Zuzu Uchiha
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/06/12 | Reply
Looks good to me. Gives me that something might or might not happen to the girl... *dramatic music plays* nice job *claps and thumbs up*