@kisskiss-bangbang:

thanks constructive criticism i'li try to make lines darker next time, i have to learn and learn really

@nezumi kurosaki:

thank you really

@cougarsama:

thanks) i really have problems with the perspective) thanks for the advice

I'm thinking that you should start drawing more mate. This is quite good. Although I do think you should darken your lines a tad- its most likely your scanner that made the lines so light but it is a little hard to see.

Nice little details though, I love the power lines and little dishes. Cute.

matt

That's really good for a start. For tips on drawing in perspective, look up an artist called Mark Kistler; he's kinda crazy, but makes it seem easier than other books and stuff I've tried.