Well, I'll admit I have zero talent with profiles myself. However, I can tell you something that is true regardless of which way the character is facing: The eyes go exactly in the center of the "y-axis" of the head. In other words, if you draw a straight line between the end of the chin and the top of the head,and then draw a perpendicular line across the face at the center point of that first line, then the character's eyes ought to be level with that second line. A lot of people put the eyes too high up because the forehead has no features and thus seems to take up less space than it really does, since we don't look at it much. Just be careful: The top of the head and the top of the hair are not usually the same. Hair always has SOME body, unless it's been totally flattened by something like a helmet. It will go up a bit before it goes down.
Uhh... that's my lecture on art theory. If you made the tops of the heads a bit higher, it would look better. I think that the arms could be a little longer as well. It's very nice despite all this, however. Your style is interesting to me. You don't use shading, but it still gives the impression of depth using lines and perspective and such.
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