Thanks a lot for the information. I think I will rework the drawing sooner than planned. I do understand what you meant, because I felt the same way about it hehe.
All of my drawings are always open for critique and appreciate the time taken to give me them. Also none of my drawings are closed for good, I am always working on them. ^^
The Silent (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/31/11 | Reply
Looks like you have a firm grasp on proportion and a strong sense of anatomy. That, of course, is essential - so well executed from that front. The only thing I might change, proportion-wise, might be the size or shape of the hood (it looks maybe a little too big, or deep to my eye). Maybe you could give some suggestion of the ears beneath it! Other than that - I really like the style of coloring / shading. I myself delight in linework, so to see the shaded areas demarcated by lines - yes! I just love it.
Thanks a lot, I appreciate the critique, it is always refreshing. I also like how the zippers and the outfit itself tend to bring out a kind of darkened side but playful. Hood brings up a tomboyish feel but she has a mysterious, wild air.
I think I can do a little better though, so keep a look out for a better looking one. ^^ Thanks again!
SeonFeng
Otakuite++ | Posted 12/31/11 | Reply
@snow fox:
Thanks a lot for the information. I think I will rework the drawing sooner than planned. I do understand what you meant, because I felt the same way about it hehe.
All of my drawings are always open for critique and appreciate the time taken to give me them. Also none of my drawings are closed for good, I am always working on them.
^^
snow fox
The Silent (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/31/11 | Reply
Looks like you have a firm grasp on proportion and a strong sense of anatomy. That, of course, is essential - so well executed from that front. The only thing I might change, proportion-wise, might be the size or shape of the hood (it looks maybe a little too big, or deep to my eye). Maybe you could give some suggestion of the ears beneath it! Other than that - I really like the style of coloring / shading. I myself delight in linework, so to see the shaded areas demarcated by lines - yes! I just love it.
SeonFeng
Otakuite++ | Posted 12/30/11 | Reply
@Sage of Magic:
Thanks a lot, I appreciate the critique, it is always refreshing. I also like how the zippers and the outfit itself tend to bring out a kind of darkened side but playful. Hood brings up a tomboyish feel but she has a mysterious, wild air.
I think I can do a little better though, so keep a look out for a better looking one. ^^ Thanks again!
Sage of Magic
Moe Foxgirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/30/11 | Reply
Quite a nice pose and expression. It all ties together well for this mysterious, seductive feel. The zippers give it a bit of an edge as well.