@Samedi-Mai:

Hahaha! Its ok! My writing is terrible to~! And yeah..... the second clean up. I need to do that more often with my art.
- Gero Chan

@Gero Chan:

mm-hmm<3 Oh gawd XD I checked what I wrote and-hahaha- I have lots of errors going on in my writing! I'm glad you understood me though! ; u ;

X3 anyway, yeah patterns! They tend to do that.
It's why we, artist, must do the "2nd clean up" to make sure we don't get lots of those! ; 3; but even when we do...a few slip away. XDD

hehe.

@Samedi-Mai:

Thank you so much~! Ill defenitely keep it in mind and the stuuf outside of the lines was actually a bit of the pattern that bled out, I was frustrated about that! Very valuable information! Thank you again!
- Gero Chan

I love the colors you used<33 It's so beautiful!

Now for a critique:

You might want to erase the color that go out of the lineart. Also, the background tends to mess around with the character. Sort of bringing it a bit off balance to the character's color. If you choose that's not tooo dark, I think it would be fine. I also see the sclera {white part of the eye} is to bright. Tone down a bit because it'll blend with the skin. now you don't want it looking ULTRA grey but a tad hint should look ok.

Other than that, I think you're really doin great! <3

@shiroyuuki1:

I Love watching Gintama! That Episode is hilarious! XD Any episode with Elizabeth in it is a win in my opinion! I like the episode where the everyones fighting over the Sukiyaki meal! I remember how they thought Elizabeth wouldnt be good with chopsticks and then are proved wrong when its (?) making oragami cranes.
- Gero Chan

@Gero Chan:

Katsura and Elizabeth together are the best! i went back a couple of days ago and rewatched the episodes when Katsura get Elizabeth...no matter how many times i watch it, i always laugh my head off. XD

@shiroyuuki1:

I love Elizabeth! Its (?) Hilariously Epic!!!! XD When I saw Katsura in your avi, all I could think of was "Zura janai.......... KATsura!!!!" ( I think thats alot of his script in each anime episode he shows up in :P)
- Gero Chan

@Gero Chan:

yup. Elizabeth might just be my favorite anime character ever!! ^_^

@shiroyuuki1:

^___^ Btw, Is your avi of Gintama?
- Gero Chan

@Gero Chan:

awesome!!!

@BlasterPenguin:

Wow! Thank you~! I tried making it look nice
- Gero Chan

Oh God this is gorgeous!

@moonlit dream:

Thank you~! And dont worry about it~! Im just happy to receive your expert critiques on my art! Your such a great artist so it means allot to me ^__^ Im glad the textures came out well!
- Gero Chan

Sorry I didn't comment on this earlier. But this is SO PRETTY!! ;3; I love the effects you used in the hair and eyes. I also like the colors you chose! :) Over all, it's a very nice picture~

@apple pai:

Thank you! Im glad the eyes turned out glossy!
- Gero Chan

she has glossy hair n eyes!!! cutttteeee! *hugs n fav*

@:

Hooray for glowing eyes and hair! Now that I look, it does look like her hair's iced 0A0' Thank you~! I was having trouble choosing clothing design, Im glad simplicity was the way to go! I was worried for a bit to tell the truth! Thank you so much! Your imagination is awesome! I would totally play a character who had iced hair in game! that would be so cool! *q*
- Gero Chan

@shiroyuuki1:

Thank you~! And I wish I did it by hand, but yes, I did with a texture and special brush ^__^
- Gero Chan

her eyes look really awesome! did you do them by hand or did you add some textures to them?