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    Carbon Frost

    Senior Otaku+ | Posted 11/13/10 | Reply

    hmmm...
    luv her face expression....
    and the placement of curls on her waist is good ..
    colors are good they don't sting the viewers eye...
    they only thing that looks off is the breaking lines of both the elbows
    especially the one thats behind her!!
    rest everything looks good !!
    Good Work!!

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    SaxGirl

    Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/05/10 | Reply

    @Driffter:

    You're welcome, it was my pleasure^__^ I'm glad you appreciated it!:)

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    Driffter

    Absentminded One (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/05/10 | Reply

    @SaxGirl:

    Thanks for your really honest opinion! I really appreciate you taking your time to critique this drawing. :D

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    SaxGirl

    Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/05/10 | Reply

    Since you asked for critique, here you go^^ I hope you don't find it offensive or anything
    First of all, I really like the character design! The hair and skirt are probably my favourite parts^^ The anatomy looks pretty good all in all, except maybe for her right arm (left arm on the picture) But that's probably just because of the position of the sketch lines. The background is slightly random, and personally, I don't really think that all the shades of green fit that well together, but I do agree with you that green's a pretty colour! Nice job all in all *hugs*

    ~S.G~

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    krokun

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/04/10 | Reply

    nice colors!!! i really like how this looks!