I like the overall design and the detail put into the shirt and especially the gun. The one thing bugging me is that the neck looks off/a bit too thick and the face looks too narrow in proportion to the neck, so I'd recommend to keep practicing proportion. Nice coloring job :)
Your body and pose are very nice along with the folds in the clothes and the gun. The only thing I'd have to say is "off" is the head looks narrow and her hair maybe should curve to it more. Great shading too, btw. :)
First off before I start on anything I will say congrats on trying out such a hard pose. The way her body is contorted must have been very difficult to work with. You did very well on that factor.
Your main problem that I can see is her face and neck. Her face/head is a little small for her body so it makes it look squished and off looking. And because it looks small the neck follows suit looking woncked and warped. If you widened the face and removed some of the slight curve in the neck it might look better and more to porprtion.
The movement that you did in her body travels well into her hair, and cloths. Her shirt flapps around well and folds were it needs to be. Her arms and legs and hands(forgot about those) look amazing. The hands themselvs shape well around the gun and she looks to be holding it properly.
You can see her personality throw her expression well so I think you achived your desired, 'kick-ass girl' idea quite well. The only think that looks out or odd here is her face and neck. Everything else looks really great.
Great drawing mate- I love her shirt by the way. Great design!
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
Really amazing pose and everything!! :'DDD the anatomy is pretty good and the detail in the gun looks very realistic. Not only that but I like how her hair looks all bad ass XDD
The only thing I can think of is that her head looks really squished. make it a little more circular, so it looks more like a head. but I would say keep the long face and pointed chin look, because that gives her that more mature/badass look. Rounder heads with a more visible jaw(idk really how to explain;;; xD) will make the character look cute. More mature/older characters usually have long oval faces and small eyes. the eyes you drew here look really great, and fit her character well! The neck also looks a bit deformed because of the size of the head, but That's an easy fix. She seems to have that "tall but elegant" kind of body structure, so a long, but proportional neck should really bring that structure out
overall wonderful job on the picture. :) Keep up the great work!
cool...~~~<3 she looks like she's ready to kill someone.. *shot* XD love the pose and the flow of her hair..~~ and awesome work on the gun.. looks great.. *^^*
lol.. thanks for being thoughtful..... i appreciate it.. if u keep working hard, u might get ur art in some games too.. keep drawing and do ur best..~~ good luck..!
Cinnamon Sparrow
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 09/13/10 | Reply
I like the overall design and the detail put into the shirt and especially the gun. The one thing bugging me is that the neck looks off/a bit too thick and the face looks too narrow in proportion to the neck, so I'd recommend to keep practicing proportion. Nice coloring job :)
Keya
Shadows Goddess (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/13/10 | Reply
Your body and pose are very nice along with the folds in the clothes and the gun. The only thing I'd have to say is "off" is the head looks narrow and her hair maybe should curve to it more. Great shading too, btw. :)
kisskiss-bangbang
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
First off before I start on anything I will say congrats on trying out such a hard pose. The way her body is contorted must have been very difficult to work with. You did very well on that factor.
Your main problem that I can see is her face and neck. Her face/head is a little small for her body so it makes it look squished and off looking. And because it looks small the neck follows suit looking woncked and warped. If you widened the face and removed some of the slight curve in the neck it might look better and more to porprtion.
The movement that you did in her body travels well into her hair, and cloths. Her shirt flapps around well and folds were it needs to be. Her arms and legs and hands(forgot about those) look amazing. The hands themselvs shape well around the gun and she looks to be holding it properly.
You can see her personality throw her expression well so I think you achived your desired, 'kick-ass girl' idea quite well. The only think that looks out or odd here is her face and neck. Everything else looks really great.
Great drawing mate- I love her shirt by the way. Great design!
Matt Tsuki
FUNimation
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
Really amazing pose and everything!! :'DDD the anatomy is pretty good and the detail in the gun looks very realistic. Not only that but I like how her hair looks all bad ass XDD
The only thing I can think of is that her head looks really squished. make it a little more circular, so it looks more like a head. but I would say keep the long face and pointed chin look, because that gives her that more mature/badass look. Rounder heads with a more visible jaw(idk really how to explain;;; xD) will make the character look cute. More mature/older characters usually have long oval faces and small eyes. the eyes you drew here look really great, and fit her character well! The neck also looks a bit deformed because of the size of the head, but That's an easy fix. She seems to have that "tall but elegant" kind of body structure, so a long, but proportional neck should really bring that structure out
overall wonderful job on the picture. :) Keep up the great work!
Carbon Frost
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
@reirei18 :
Arigatou na !! :]..... i sure hope to get some in games :D
reirei18
reirei18.com (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
cool...~~~<3 she looks like she's ready to kill someone.. *shot* XD love the pose and the flow of her hair..~~ and awesome work on the gun.. looks great.. *^^*
lol.. thanks for being thoughtful..... i appreciate it.. if u keep working hard, u might get ur art in some games too.. keep drawing and do ur best..~~ good luck..!
*hugs* rei..~~<3