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    Michiyo Shimizu

    Queen of theO � (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/03/10 | Reply

    @FalseDelusion:

    Well not that it's that bad D': LOL ;;


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    Wakusei Aoshi

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/27/10 | Reply

    I love the shading and all the details! It looks so pretty! I like it the way it is with only the balloons coloured! :D

    I see a problem with the legs. The one in the front looks skinnier than the one in the back...which...shouldn't be...O.o So maybe if you make the front one a bit thicker than that'd fix the problem!

    Dunno if anybody else said the same thing, though...I didn't read ALL of the comments...Oh, yes I did...XD

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    FalseDelusion

    Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/27/10 | Reply

    @ajLOVEStobi:

    YESS!!!
    you're the only one who noticed
    yeah, i was grossly influenced by her stuff
    cuz i wanted something cute
    so i browsed through her gallery
    and picked up a few tricks XD

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    ajLOVEStobi

    Otaku Legend | Posted 08/27/10 | Reply

    Aww! Shes really cute :) You are good. Reminds me of hellobaby's art from off of deviant art. My only thing is from the knee down looks a bit short to me and maybe add a simple background. :) Good luck, its going to turn out great ^-^

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    red:leaf

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    It's really cute so far. Maybe add a horizon, a bit of a background? With the images in the forefront, the background really stands out in it's blankness. It doesn't have to anything complicated, I don't think. Maybe a simple landscape. What you've got is really great though. Good luck finishing it up!

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    Captain Ronnie

    Otaku Legend | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    I like it the way it is. especially how the balloons are colored but nothing else it. :)

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    superstarpanou

    Question Cafér (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @FalseDelusion:

    You'll be fine. I have a hard time getting my original style, too... There's so many awesome artists! But yeah, do whatever though. I think with your skills, you can make anything look good. ^_^ Good luck!

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    DixieWings

    Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    I think a city-scape or some building and a few clouds might finish it off nicely :D
    I like her clothing and especially those sleeves and the pose is amazing.

    Really nice of you to draw your co-workers something <3

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    FalseDelusion

    Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @superstarpanou:

    i actually got grossly imfluenced by hellobaby from dA's work
    cuz i started out trying to draw myself
    then i wanted to make myself seem better looking
    so i made it cuter looking
    and everything just devianted from that =3=
    and now its not even my style anymore >.<

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    FalseDelusion

    Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @:

    thanksss

    what about some simple fluf clouds though?

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    superstarpanou

    Question Cafér (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    WOW! The detail on this is really good, especially on her clothes. ^_^ I say you leave as is... if you put too, too much on there then it's gonna be too busy. Simplicity is best for this one. :D

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    FalseDelusion

    Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @SakuraDust:

    Cha
    you know how sex depribed i am XD

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    Yammy Riyalgo

    Otaku Legend | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    Add some confetti or some sort of "dreamy colors" in the background.

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    SakuraDust

    Moderator | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @FalseDelusion:

    My, my... and you're the seme who just can't help getting turned on huh? >3

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    FalseDelusion

    Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @SakuraDust:

    You're always the one who start this!!!! D=
    or at least encourage it =3=

    you're like those seductive mischivous ukes that just brings out the pervert in the seme >.<

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    SakuraDust

    Moderator | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @FalseDelusion:

    Omg, every comment, conversation of our reaches this perverted point doesn't it? XDDD

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    Moofins

    Otakuite++ | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @FalseDelusion:

    I can see there being some swirly clouds or some sparkles, like confetti-shaped mebbes...

    I think it's her hands and the how she looks like she's spinning through the air.


    Last edited by Moofins at 8:59:13 AM CDT on August 26, 2010.

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    FalseDelusion

    Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @Shi Bum Bumm:

    i need to write all these good suggestions down =D

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    Shi Bum Bumm

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    Since her hands are out and in a whirl motion, maybe she can be making a whoosh with clouds around her :D Because it's really whimsical.

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    FalseDelusion

    Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @SakuraDust:

    LOL! Just re-read and realized that you said maso and not macho
    Nah, I wouldn’t put YOU into a can, because that’d involve cutting you into little pieces and compressing everything to fit into the can. That, would kill you. Nono, I want something special and longer lasting for you
    -evil smirk-
    Hint, it involves chains, cage, and lots of toys
    -innocent blink-

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    FalseDelusion

    Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @Michiyo Shimizu:

    you think so too?? Q____Q

    k, i'll fix that XD

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    FalseDelusion

    Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @reirei18 :

    of course you'd fit!! D=

    omg, i googled where i'll be staying...
    IT'S SO FAR!!
    like, by driving, google says it'd take 38 minutes Q__Q

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    FalseDelusion

    Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    @SakuraDust:

    D8

    k, i might go with that >.<
    THANKSSs

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    SakuraDust

    Moderator | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    COLOR IT! *is being maso*
    Hmmm... The background seems a bit empty, but I don't suggest anything fancy because there are lots of details. Maybe a road, or the sky at her feet with a few stars and a city above her. A surreal bg.

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    15385bic

    Lazy Chocobikies (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    =D
    i like the lack of colour in the rest of the pic besides the balloons >_< - i say leave it

    she's so cute >_< - and i love ur clothes-sense XD - the detail is amazing ~

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    Michiyo Shimizu

    Queen of theO � (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    It's a cute picture and she has love hair and a cute outfit~~~ O: except I find that her legs are kind of odd in proportion and size...? It seems like the lower part of her legs are 2/3 of what they need to be in length O:

    But telling by the size of the paper... I think it'd be okay to just leave it like that.


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    stinamuffin

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    CoughColouritcough

    XD i love it! It gives them the message 'Hey I most likely never have to see you again hooray *balloons release* XD jk jk srsly, it's good the way it is and It's so sweet that you're drawing a pic for them. I really think you don't need anything more. Maybe a few random things around her legs and the flowers >.> Idk, my brain ain't working right XD

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    reirei18

    reirei18.com (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply

    eh.... wip...? epic..... @v@!

    i think it looks fine as it is.... o.o but yeh.. "colour it" but i doubt i'll fit in a coke can.. lol..

    i like how there's bits of colours in this picture.. and... amazing details.... awesome work..~~<3


    *hugs* rei..~~<3