Aww not a problem! There aren't very many people that comment on the art of people they aren't familiar with, so I make it a goal that I comment on deserving artworks that don't have comments everyday. ^^ I'm so glad I could be of help to you! Can't wait to see more of your art!!<33 And thank you for subscribing to me, you're very sweet! >.<
Woah, didn't expect such a big comment~
Yeah, this was the first time I drew with paint tool sai and the curve tool, so it isn't the best...
But I did better than I thought I would. ^^
Except for the eye, which I didn't notice until after I started colouring it. Damn.
But I'm going to keep trying, and thanks for the comment~!
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/12/10 | Reply
My, I'm quite surprised that I didn't come by to see your portfolio before! Your art is so nice ^^ And you have a variety of styles too...sketches to CG to a little bit of everything =)
Anyway, on to the piccy~
This is actually pretty nice! I really like how clean the lines are, so there isn't really any confusion witht he line work ^^ It also looks like your coloring has improved from some of your previous pics, especially with the shading around the mouth, you can see the improvement ^^ The colors you chose for her eyes are pretty interesting~ but overall I like the simplicity of her design ^^ It'll be nice to see more art of her in the future!
Hm...critique-wise, I'd have to say that you should probably work a bit more on detail for the lines. Although they are clean, a lot of them don't connect at some parts and it takes away from the cohesiveness of the pic and makes it seem a bit rushed that way. I love the coloring, but regarding the eyes, the shape of the eyes is not symmetrical, for the green eye is a lot more elongated and is not on level with the other eye.
Otherwise, I really love this~ I can definitely see improvement in your art! I'll be watching out for your work, so keep up the great arts!
aragorn1014
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/13/10 | Reply
@nosheep13:
Aww not a problem! There aren't very many people that comment on the art of people they aren't familiar with, so I make it a goal that I comment on deserving artworks that don't have comments everyday. ^^ I'm so glad I could be of help to you! Can't wait to see more of your art!!<33 And thank you for subscribing to me, you're very sweet! >.<
nosheep13
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/12/10 | Reply
@aragorn1014:
Woah, didn't expect such a big comment~
Yeah, this was the first time I drew with paint tool sai and the curve tool, so it isn't the best...
But I did better than I thought I would. ^^
Except for the eye, which I didn't notice until after I started colouring it. Damn.
But I'm going to keep trying, and thanks for the comment~!
aragorn1014
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/12/10 | Reply
My, I'm quite surprised that I didn't come by to see your portfolio before! Your art is so nice ^^ And you have a variety of styles too...sketches to CG to a little bit of everything =)
Anyway, on to the piccy~
This is actually pretty nice! I really like how clean the lines are, so there isn't really any confusion witht he line work ^^ It also looks like your coloring has improved from some of your previous pics, especially with the shading around the mouth, you can see the improvement ^^ The colors you chose for her eyes are pretty interesting~ but overall I like the simplicity of her design ^^ It'll be nice to see more art of her in the future!
Hm...critique-wise, I'd have to say that you should probably work a bit more on detail for the lines. Although they are clean, a lot of them don't connect at some parts and it takes away from the cohesiveness of the pic and makes it seem a bit rushed that way. I love the coloring, but regarding the eyes, the shape of the eyes is not symmetrical, for the green eye is a lot more elongated and is not on level with the other eye.
Otherwise, I really love this~ I can definitely see improvement in your art! I'll be watching out for your work, so keep up the great arts!