I like it! I wanna read the side bit though! What's it say?

I won't commenting about the colouring this time. xD Even though I technically did. I love love LOVE this picture. You know guys crying gets me every time. It makes my heart bleed. Like the R/S pic you're drawing. Yey, I love that sort of stuff.

i think it looks fine,you color alot better than i do.

GGRR YOU MAKE ME MAD! I WANT TO BE ABLE TO COLOUR GOOD! Wahh I suck *reduced to a sopping wet teary eyed mess on the floor*

hmm...not bad