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    Otakuite+ | Posted 02/22/10 | Reply

    @VivaLaParadise:

    haha, i got what you mean and its fine^^ thanks for the feedback:]

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    Otakuite+ | Posted 02/22/10 | Reply

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    aw, why thank you! im glad you like it^^

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 02/22/10 | Reply

    @deadxdove:

    youre welcome<3
    i didnt mean that the hair itself is messy, but the lines that go into her face, also i didnt mean the pupil itself, but the lines that separate it. sorry if that wasnt clear >.< dont get me wrong though! i think its a very successful drawing :D

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    Otakuite+ | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply

    @VivaLaParadise:

    hey, thanks so much!^^
    and i know the hair is a little messy, but i was going for that effect.lol and i wouldnt fixed the pupil, but i liked the way her eyes looked sort of blank.lol
    but thanks^^

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply

    You did a great job with the view! it better than anything i could do. you might want to work on the neatness when drawing hair, but since its only an experiment, its not that big of a deal.
    The out line of the eye is really good, but you might want to add the lines for the pupil. i like the facial expression you gave her, its like she is surprised or blushing.

    great work! keep it up <3