lmao. thanks for the criticism~ x.D *hugs*
D: at the arm. I'll remember that for future pics.
The neck being too thick... It's actually thinner then it looks, but I colored a little part as skin by accident. and forgot to fix it-- ;w;
The railing looks off because I didn't use a ruler, LOL.
*wants to learn how to draw straighter lines without a ruler*
thanks for all of the criticism though.
I'll think about what you said for my future pictures :D
Ok, my DA comment had compliments, now for a little constructive criticism.
First off, we shouldn't be able to see his right shoulder like that from this angle. It makes his arm look kinda twisted (and we don't want that, do we?)
Secondly, the railing looks kinda off. It's hard to explain without showing you where ^.^" But I'll try my best. Around where it goes behind his body, the left side (his left) is higher than the right and looks like it's bent XP But this is just a small detail that can be easily overlooked (I'm picky about small details XP)
Lastly, the neck looks a little too thick ^^ But again, small detail XP
And... That's all I've got for you. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK DIXIE!
Last edited by FFNaru134 at 7:31:09 PM EST on February 16, 2010.
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/19/10 | Reply
@Erie Machista:
Thank you~~~~ I'm glad you like it~! x.D <33
Erie Machista
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/19/10 | Reply
DIXIE LOVE YOUUU XDDD well i did comment on DA though ahahha XDDD and L.O.V.E FOR EVERYTHING <33~~~
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply
@FFNaru134:
lmao. thanks for the criticism~ x.D *hugs*
D: at the arm. I'll remember that for future pics.
The neck being too thick... It's actually thinner then it looks, but I colored a little part as skin by accident. and forgot to fix it-- ;w;
The railing looks off because I didn't use a ruler, LOL.
*wants to learn how to draw straighter lines without a ruler*
thanks for all of the criticism though.
I'll think about what you said for my future pictures :D
FFNaru134
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/16/10 | Reply
*huggy huggy huuuuuggy ^^*
Ok, my DA comment had compliments, now for a little constructive criticism.
First off, we shouldn't be able to see his right shoulder like that from this angle. It makes his arm look kinda twisted (and we don't want that, do we?)
Secondly, the railing looks kinda off. It's hard to explain without showing you where ^.^" But I'll try my best. Around where it goes behind his body, the left side (his left) is higher than the right and looks like it's bent XP But this is just a small detail that can be easily overlooked (I'm picky about small details XP)
Lastly, the neck looks a little too thick ^^ But again, small detail XP
And... That's all I've got for you. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK DIXIE!
Last edited by FFNaru134 at 7:31:09 PM EST on February 16, 2010.
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/16/10 | Reply
nuhohoho
niceeeeee...
and the tail looks really cute spinned around