Wow, I really love this picture. To improve it the only thing you need to do is bring the nose in a bit.

I have no advice. Probably because, out of all your pictures, this one is my favorite. I'm not sure why. (Maybe it's the angel wings?) Besides being well drawn...

advice hmm? well the only thing i would point out is to not make the nose as high up as it is, lower it and make it a little less pointy... but beside that your doing really good! ^_^

i think it's fanta already :D u really hve improved

dont worry your not alone!!!! my friends dont even know what anime is!they dont like drawing either!BOO HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!

good pic..the only problem is the nose ;P

dude awsome pic but i have toagree with irrelevance the nose is a bit off apart from that i think it is an awsome pic^-^