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    Otakuite++ | Posted 01/10/10 | Reply

    @saekimidori:

    Thank you for the critique! I'll try to fix those.

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/08/10 | Reply

    Interesting background! XD The face looks good, but I think his body is too straight. It would be good if you added a little bit of curve (not too much, because that would be too feminine), and perhaps more folds in the clothes. =)