Hmm, not to be insulting but there is definately room for improvement. The drawing and shading itself is good, especially the chest area, but you need to sort out the proportions of your creature. The head is far too large, and its shoulders are in the wrong position. It's as if someone's just stuck them onto the sides of his body...the join between the body and shoulders needs to be smoother. If you look at a person's shoulders, the don't look like a couple of balls stuck onto the body. The arms need to be a bit longer too. The top half of the arm should reach the top of the hips, and the bottom and top half of the arms should be the same length. The outlining could also be a little neater. This is important to making the picture look clean and smooth. Ok, I've ranted enough now. Normally I wouldn't make so many comments, but you specifically asked for opinions, so there you are. ^-^ Remember I am not insulting you, I'm just trying to help. You've made a good start with this picture, so just keep on improving and you'll get there eventually. Luff XxX