Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/29/09 | Reply
Ouch the piccy is a bit harsh in that way xDD I don't know if Pit would necessarily be that assertive in my view...he's confident but not agressive(so I think anyway). But then again, people are entitled to their own opinions on the characters~
I say, you're improving on coloring the hair~ the shadows/highlights are a bit more visible, which is great ^^ The clothes as well are getting better, detail-wise too.
The only suggestion bit would be to work on your proportions and watch where clothes fold and how. A great way to practice in improving detail would be redrawing pictures by professional manga-ka...it really does help ^^
Proportion-wise, take note of the length of their arms. The elbow for Pit's right arm(our left) should be more clearly visible and his arm should also be longer(when we put our arms down to our sides, it should extend to about the top(ish) of our thighs). Just a suggestion bit to take note of, is all~
And question-wise:
1)The Good Life is pretty good~ but personally speaking it is a bit confusing at times. I'm glad you experiment more in your comic than in your fanart with perspective and such ^^. The only thing about mangas is that it should be as clear as possible to the reader and shouldn't require explanation. In TGL's case, it's a bit difficult to keep up sometimes, is all.
2)I don't fully know Rumeidia's personality because the story hasn't progressed completely yet, but she's alright to me ^^
3)The thing I like about your art is that it's unique. You try a lot of different themes with characters, which most people often avoid. (this comment is getting long so I'll cut this short) I would ignore what those two said about your art because improvement does take time, and they aren't professionals either so who are they to tell you what to do?
Ego boosts are good, but remember, you can't satisfy every person you meet, k? *hugs* Try some new things and eventually you'll get better ^^ Keep up the good work my friend~
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Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/29/09 | Reply
Ouch the piccy is a bit harsh in that way xDD I don't know if Pit would necessarily be that assertive in my view...he's confident but not agressive(so I think anyway). But then again, people are entitled to their own opinions on the characters~
I say, you're improving on coloring the hair~ the shadows/highlights are a bit more visible, which is great ^^ The clothes as well are getting better, detail-wise too.
The only suggestion bit would be to work on your proportions and watch where clothes fold and how. A great way to practice in improving detail would be redrawing pictures by professional manga-ka...it really does help ^^
Proportion-wise, take note of the length of their arms. The elbow for Pit's right arm(our left) should be more clearly visible and his arm should also be longer(when we put our arms down to our sides, it should extend to about the top(ish) of our thighs). Just a suggestion bit to take note of, is all~
And question-wise:
1)The Good Life is pretty good~ but personally speaking it is a bit confusing at times. I'm glad you experiment more in your comic than in your fanart with perspective and such ^^. The only thing about mangas is that it should be as clear as possible to the reader and shouldn't require explanation. In TGL's case, it's a bit difficult to keep up sometimes, is all.
2)I don't fully know Rumeidia's personality because the story hasn't progressed completely yet, but she's alright to me ^^
3)The thing I like about your art is that it's unique. You try a lot of different themes with characters, which most people often avoid. (this comment is getting long so I'll cut this short) I would ignore what those two said about your art because improvement does take time, and they aren't professionals either so who are they to tell you what to do?
Ego boosts are good, but remember, you can't satisfy every person you meet, k? *hugs* Try some new things and eventually you'll get better ^^ Keep up the good work my friend~