Ok, this is better than your other picture. The details are good, and you've made the proportions a little more accurate too. Once again though you need to sort out those shoulders, they still look like balls!! With a bit of shading and outlining, this could be a wonderful piece of art. ^-^ Oh yeah, like angel of solitude said, please sort out his bulge...looks a bit odd...

you make his package a little more noticable then needed :P oh well good drawing:P