its pretty sweet, i dont like the drawing as much as i like the idea though, go for another attempt. it could be awsome

Here's a review by Jay, the angry guy, .....................I HATE UR PIC ITS NOTHIN LIKE HIM PUNK DOES NOT HAVE A HART ON A SLEEVE AND THE COLORING UGH DONT GET ME STARTED ....THAT IS ALL. Man, soory dude, it could be better,

heh heh. The funny thing is that I've got an outfit that looks almost exactly like that! Very good Job!