haha she's cute! :)
i think that the straps on her shirt should be a little farther spaced... hmmm like instead of them being like this:
_____/__
it should be more like:
_|_____|_
oh! and colour choices! especially for the hair, maybe if you picked colour(s) that would stand out from the other characters? like if everyone has rainbow coloured hair, she's the only one with ordinary brown/black type thing x] eye colour should especially unique too!
i really like her outfit though, it's a great design!
Hiya! ^.^ Lineart looks great! ^.^ Hmmm... Do you mind if I change a few things? I would move the sleeves down to around her elbows and take the ribbon from the end of the sleeve to the top. Thenmaybe some detail to the dress, but other than that, I think the character looks great! Awesome hair by the way!
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Otakuite++ | Posted 05/08/09 | Reply
haha she's cute! :)
i think that the straps on her shirt should be a little farther spaced... hmmm like instead of them being like this:
_____/__
it should be more like:
_|_____|_
oh! and colour choices! especially for the hair, maybe if you picked colour(s) that would stand out from the other characters? like if everyone has rainbow coloured hair, she's the only one with ordinary brown/black type thing x] eye colour should especially unique too!
i really like her outfit though, it's a great design!
Rein Akira
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/05/09 | Reply
Hiya! ^.^ Lineart looks great! ^.^ Hmmm... Do you mind if I change a few things? I would move the sleeves down to around her elbows and take the ribbon from the end of the sleeve to the top. Thenmaybe some detail to the dress, but other than that, I think the character looks great! Awesome hair by the way!
~Aki-chan