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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/15/09 | Reply

    @JnVbt:

    No, thank you for your comment. :D I will do my best to make my linearts more clean. It's less work for me later. ^^;

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    Otakuite++ | Posted 05/15/09 | Reply

    nice one! :)
    expression is funny enought =DD & pose is good
    anatomy - perfect!
    details - great!
    shading - good!

    mystakes? umm ... the only thing that I can point at is ur lineart! :)
    it`s a bit too messy ... =]

    sry for my critic!
    keep it up!

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/06/09 | Reply

    @FlowerKiss:

    I shall do that. :|

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/06/09 | Reply

    @The Shirt:

    You showed him the piece and asked his opinion?

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/05/09 | Reply

    @Team Plasma N:

    I already understand that we all have our own lives to tend to. I'm not a psycho when it comes to comments. :P If a person is able to share their thoughts, then of course, by all means, share them with me. But if not, I'm not going to throw a tantrum and un-friend you. xD I'm just grateful you had something nice to say. And on top of that, you like what you see. So thanks. :]

    p.s. [Hope your doing well in college. ^^d ]

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/05/09 | Reply

    @FlowerKiss:

    He has helped me thus far but I don't know what else to ask. It's all about whether the light is hitting the surface of this or that. ::*shrugs*:: It's easier said than done. Dx

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    Chibi Artist Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/05/09 | Reply

    Actually, the shading looks pretty good, you know. But I've heard that some people either have someone pose for them or reference the shadows on a model of some other kind, like a statue or action figure. Never tried it, but it's probably worth a shot? ^-^ Just in case that helps...

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    Sinbad of Sindria (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/05/09 | Reply

    This is a great piece of work you did. Keep it up and so I will be giving you a hug for it, but please forgive me if you get this comment more than one because it's not that I am ignoring your artwork or not taking the time, I just have a lot to do with college and I miss leaving comments for everyone like I used to do. So I am giving everyone a comment and a hug. Its not anything bad thing but I do sorry for it. Your artwork is very important to me so that is why I want you to know I did look at it, I think it looks really good, plus I want to give you a hug. Please understand and forgive me. Good work!!!

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/05/09 | Reply

    I think the shading looks pretty good. You could try staring at people to see how the light hits them. :)
    Or you can look at a professional piece of art that has good shading.
    Better yet, you have an art intructor. He should be able to help too, right?

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    Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/04/09 | Reply

    Awesome. ^_^ everything you drew looks great. ;D