*lafes at inocent hearts reaction*
see seems like an evil charecter too me XD
every one seems to think that this charecter is busty
though i can see what you are going for
try moving her whole torso a littel down and making her waist a littel longer so that it doesent look like her boobs are the pick XD
[like put them below the half way point of the pick]
[oh and i think this was alredy kinda implyed but move her chest boobs lowere[like they start at the bottom of the arm pit and end at a few inces away from the elbow [depends on the persons style on hwo they draw arms ]]
I like the style bro,you got something new in this picture.Maybe it´s your lineart moving into the newt step,either way I be here to watch that for sure.
O_O Woah there! XD LOL. Hmm...pretty good job, the only thing I would suggest is to make her arms a little more feminine and her chest a little bit smaller on the sides so it can show the upper part of her arms. ^_^ I would like to see this colored though sometime! Great job Jerry! *hugs*
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/27/08 | Reply
*lafes at inocent hearts reaction*
see seems like an evil charecter too me XD
every one seems to think that this charecter is busty
though i can see what you are going for
try moving her whole torso a littel down and making her waist a littel longer so that it doesent look like her boobs are the pick XD
[like put them below the half way point of the pick]
[oh and i think this was alredy kinda implyed but move her chest boobs lowere[like they start at the bottom of the arm pit and end at a few inces away from the elbow [depends on the persons style on hwo they draw arms ]]
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
Bulma
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/27/08 | Reply
She's sooo busty. I feel like that overwhelms her.
If there's nothing wrong with me, then there must be something wrong with the universe!
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/27/08 | Reply
I like the style bro,you got something new in this picture.Maybe it´s your lineart moving into the newt step,either way I be here to watch that for sure.
Angel
innocent heart
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/26/08 | Reply
O_O Woah there! XD LOL. Hmm...pretty good job, the only thing I would suggest is to make her arms a little more feminine and her chest a little bit smaller on the sides so it can show the upper part of her arms. ^_^ I would like to see this colored though sometime! Great job Jerry! *hugs*