lol this is so cute hehe Do you draw from scratch or do you look at a picture?
You did excellent with ed's hair, awesome job with his eyes too. the line structure is perfect there lol
I like giving people constrictive criticism to help them improve with their artwork^_^
Maybe try to smooth out your lines a little bit and not make them as wavy. it's true people do have a lot of curve to them but it's mainly their clothes and the creases in them. So for example, see how ed's left (right) leg on the outside is a straight line. try to straighten your lines out like you have there but keep a little bit of curve so you can tell it's the object you're drawing.
somegirl
Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/10/08 | Reply
You did excellent with ed's hair, awesome job with his eyes too. the line structure is perfect there lol
I like giving people constrictive criticism to help them improve with their artwork^_^
Maybe try to smooth out your lines a little bit and not make them as wavy. it's true people do have a lot of curve to them but it's mainly their clothes and the creases in them. So for example, see how ed's left (right) leg on the outside is a straight line. try to straighten your lines out like you have there but keep a little bit of curve so you can tell it's the object you're drawing.
excellent job again iske!^_^
-Jae♥
chemisis
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/10/08 | Reply
This is really good, keep it up