@Haru kun:

Keep trying to shade. I used to find shading really, really hard. Actually, i still do. If i'm careful enough though, it usually turns out okay. Thanks for the comment. I didn't know how i was going to shade in the sleeves but then i came up with something. If you look at the drawing I have really close, you might be able to see the lines separating the different levels of shading, but since the I had to take the picture on a digital camera from far away to fit the picture in, it's hardly visible. Plus, I blended it a tiny bit with tissue paper. If you blend it too much, it'll smear.

@Angel Zakuro:

Thanks. I hoped someone would notice the eyes. I've always practiced drawing eyes because they are just so lovely to look at. My hand just seems to doodle eyes when i'm bored because it's a nice easy curved line that starts it out. I never thought they'd be the part that would stick out the most to you. Thanks again.

@foxfireburn:

Thanks. I tried the best I could but also wanted to make it a little different, so I added the background, but I guess that didn't change it too much. Thanks again.

This is so very cute! I love Machi, she is adorable.

How lovely...you're getting so good. Wow. ^_^ I love her eyes and hair especially! So pretty. Her outfit is cute as well. But wow again to the eyes. XD You're like a master at making prettiful detailed eyes!! Great job~

I think it looks close to being a page right out of the manga, really beautiful job!

@asialonewolfe:

I still think it's perfect

I have to say it's not so bad, but maybe if i had spent more time on the background, it would've looked better.

I think it looks very cool
you did a great work on the shading as well!
it's perfect
that was my view on it,what about you?