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    Grand Otaku | Posted 08/10/08 | Reply

    @somegirl:

    ^ _ ^ Thanks! Please don't be sorry! You did good and has already helped me a lot with your comment. Also, it's ok for me to use a phone to take a picture of my art. I really love sharing them.
    ^ _ ^

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    Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/10/08 | Reply

    @shiraz03:

    You can use it if you'd like. Just save it on your computer and click edit for the picture. Your choice, sorry i couldn't fix the static.

    I'm sorry you have to use a phone, that's got to be terrible

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 08/10/08 | Reply

    @Shi Bum Bumm:

    ah... Thanks again! I'll keep that in mind and will try to edit them a bit before i submit. ^ _ ^ Lots of thanks and smiles! ^ _ ^ ^ _ ^

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/10/08 | Reply

    Yeah, I noticed that too. Your art is pretty light, it looks beautiful but would be easier to see with contrast. Somegirl's re-do was a good example, it may have been a tad bit too much of contrast though

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 08/10/08 | Reply

    @somegirl:

    Hi somegirl! Thank you for your comments! I don't have a scanner so I have to take a photo of it and use my brother's phone. I'll take another photo and will repost it. ^ _ ^ I agree with you, i really should have added more corals. I have thought of that after I colored it... And i really like what you did in imageshack. The colors look a lot better there! Thanks again!

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 08/10/08 | Reply

    @Shi Bum Bumm:

    Thank you Neko! ^ _ ^

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    Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/10/08 | Reply

    I love this picture, it's so beautiful!
    I noticed your scanner/camera gave you a bit of a hard time. I tired to see if I could take out some of the static for you there but I was unsucessful..
    http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3549/54927420080805020006nl7.jpg

    I love the color you have in this picture though, it's beautiful! The shell would be my most favorite thing about your picture. you did a wonderful job shading it.

    I like to give a little consturctive criticism so everyone can try to improve and i'm not honestly too sure what to tell you to do. Hmm...
    Maybe put coarl on the ground around the shell so get more senery and detal. It would make the shell stand out a bit more.

    Either way the picture is beautiful. wonderful job.

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/10/08 | Reply

    It's so peaceful, the soft colours and flowing hair and such *.*
    Very beautiful peice of work meh friend. Very nice poem to go with it

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 08/10/08 | Reply

    Thank you Kukki chan! ^ _ ^

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    Otaku Legend | Posted 08/10/08 | Reply

    oooh que lindo
    so pretty♥
    it kinda makes me
    peaceful looking at it..
    O.O is dat weird?
    anyways!! tis is
    pretty sweet
    keep up da good work~