Cool. The right sight is obviously Naruto, and I assume the left side is Sasuke. The division looks good, almost like a torn paper. I'd guess the distortion Crimson is talking about is in the eye, looks a little up and the angle is a little off.
Thanks so much for the contructive critism! I really appreciate it! I will definatly do as you said and use plain paper when ever i can! I was in class after a big test though, and i couldnt get up...
Again, thanks so much for the comment!
Naruto's side, (his face) looks a bit distorted. You also shouldn't use lined paper, use a plain A4 paper, so we can see the lines & the shading better!
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/09 | Reply
@avi101:
Yeah, the left side is Sasuke. It was all just an illusion though
Oh okay, thanks for the help. I appreciate it. I'm always looking for ways to improve.
Thanks for the comment!
avi101
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/25/09 | Reply
Cool. The right sight is obviously Naruto, and I assume the left side is Sasuke. The division looks good, almost like a torn paper. I'd guess the distortion Crimson is talking about is in the eye, looks a little up and the angle is a little off.
smoking crimson
Sunrise (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/17/08 | Reply
@AnimeArchAngel:
It is it THAT awesome? *Awesome music comes*
hehe.
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AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/17/08 | Reply
@smoking crimson:
lol, im glad you did leave that comment! I think its great for you to wanna help people improve! Thats wicked awesome!
~AnimeArchAngel
smoking crimson
Sunrise (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/17/08 | Reply
@AnimeArchAngel:
It's fine! I always try to give a little constructive comment, so that the person drawing the picture may feel an inspiration to improve~
(that was SO gai/lee,the comment above- hehe)
CrimsonA
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AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/16/08 | Reply
@chemisis:
Thanks so much :)
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/16/08 | Reply
@smoking crimson:
Thanks so much for the contructive critism! I really appreciate it! I will definatly do as you said and use plain paper when ever i can! I was in class after a big test though, and i couldnt get up...
Again, thanks so much for the comment!
chemisis
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/09/08 | Reply
Good drawing
smoking crimson
Sunrise (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/09/08 | Reply
Naruto's side, (his face) looks a bit distorted. You also shouldn't use lined paper, use a plain A4 paper, so we can see the lines & the shading better!
Other than that nice job!
CrimsonANBU~
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