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    lazyweird1

    Grand Otaku | Posted 06/28/08 | Reply

    *drink spew* Dranz-san!!! Lucky you~ Hahaha. Both of you really do look adorable together. You should make more couples pics. Hahaha. Whatever! *blushes* So cute...SQUEE!!! XDDD

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    Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/27/08 | Reply

    I'm sure you are perfectly fine on theO with kissing. Yes.

    This is lovely, such a beautiful moment! I think you drew your hair well, and both yours and his necks are good too *nods* I think it works well without too much shading ^_^

    You should keep this on theO. I'm sure nobody could have a problem with it. *hugs*

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    Otaku Legend | Posted 06/27/08 | Reply

    @Seto Grl:

    You could give it a go if you wanted ~ Smiles ~ The girl is me and is in the other pictures with the spiders and stuff if you need to see more of her, I look forward to seeing what you come up with

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    Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/27/08 | Reply

    Whee...! You've done it so well! Your little project... =^w^= So great! He definitely looks like he wants more. =^^= You both look like you were meant to be! Like a husband and wife sharing their wedding kiss. =^-^=

    And as far as the shading goes, I think the lack of shading works here. You can focus more on the love than the tones. There's nothing wrong with a simple kiss. =^-^=

    Excellent job, Magnus. Your work is really coming along.

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    sparkle 078

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/26/08 | Reply

    so this is your secret project. XD you silly fangirl, you. i like it.you did a great job at drawing them kissing when you didn't know how they look like while doing that. *blushes* so cute. [probably not what you want to hear.....^^'] you should leave it!!! it's something that ppl should be able to see after you have submitted more work. then they can see just how much you have progressed. i like it!! so cute. XD

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    Miz (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/26/08 | Reply

    Ohhhhh, so this is the secret project, eh? XD
    Dont worry, I think this is fine for theO, I've seen a lot worse >__> ...
    I think the lineart is really well done^^ No need to be embarassed, be proud of ur Tyki fangirlness!! XDDD I bet that every fangirl out there has a pic similar to this, so dont worry about it.

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    innocent heart

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/26/08 | Reply

    Aw, this is such a sweet drawing. Its really touching and romantic. You two make the cutest couple^^ XD I think this is drawn very good Dranz! I know two people kissing can be a very hard thing to draw, but you did a wonderful job at it! The perspective looks good as well^^ Keep up the great work my friend! *huggles*

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    Seto Grl

    Otaku Legend | Posted 06/26/08 | Reply

    this is good.i could say u did a great job. But i was more wondering can i draw them for you?

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    Otakuite+ | Posted 06/26/08 | Reply

    the critic comes out in me, dont take it too harshly because you are obviously a much better artist then me ^__^ I think, as you said, the lips are a bit off. They seem to be biting each other? Arg, i forgot you cant go back and look at the picutre. I like the hair as well, but think the neck is a little stretched out. I love you anyway Magnus

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    ElvesAteMyRamen

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/26/08 | Reply

    It came out great!! It's very hard to draw 2 character together and even harder making them interact with one another...especially in a kissing scene! I think you did a great job and the hair is my fave part as well!

    Good work!

    ~*Elves

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    xaos

    Burning Spirit (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/26/08 | Reply

    That's nice Steph! It's great. As for categories, all you have to do is put it in D.gray-man and check the fan characters box. It would be set. Kissing is perfectly alright. There was a couple kissing pictures I've seen here before. As long as they're not showing... stuff and it's only kissing it's perfect. Wonderful job, love the work you did on your hair too.

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    Angel Zakuro

    bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 06/26/08 | Reply

    Aww, how sweet! Very cute!! :3 I never expected you to draw a kissing scene...so that's you and someone from DGM? Again, I don't know the show so I don't know! XD But wow, this is great! Nice job!

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    Mercury Dragon

    Otaku Legend | Posted 06/26/08 | Reply

    Nee-san, it's amazing!! I wish I could draw such intimate moments that well...

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    DarkxBlood

    Otakuite+ | Posted 06/26/08 | Reply

    You've drawn it much better than I would ever would; I just can't draw people kissing! D;

    Oh well, I guess time and practice does its magic. :3
    But I must say, in your post I really expect something really "saucy" *giggles at the word*

    I would like some shading, just to add some more to it. But other than that good job!

    - :3

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    Emmah

    Otaku Legend | Posted 06/26/08 | Reply

    Emmah does indeed like this picture. You've drawn it superly well, and don't worry. I think you're safe with kissing here on TheO XD