WHADDYA MEAN "crap" That's one of the best FMA pictures that I've seen in ages!!!! Sure, Al looks a little too young but WHO CARES!!!! It's great as far as I'm concerned, you didn't copy the picture! That's a step up from what have the people here do! Great job on the clothing, it looks so smooth and "flowing" I really like it! Good character body proportions, good eyes, and the expressions look really nice - as in they look, "real"
Keep up the AWESOME work!

I love your style, really captured that flying feel with this one as the hair is well drawn. Wonderful expressions too

tis looks so pretty!! n ____ n

Wow, that isn't crap at all! Nice colouring, especially the background.

For some reason, this really looks like something out of Howl's Moving Castle. ^^

Good job! ^^ *hugs and favourites*

Hey, that's so not crap! That's awesome, amazing work! :]

I really like how it looks as though they're flying. It's very cool looking from this angle!

Winry looks really pretty, and I think Al and Ed look perfectly fine. No worries! ;D