Yea it sucks but for a first try having nothing to go on, no book to help, no pics for reference, and it completely original it's not that bad. Thanks for all the tips they will help a lot. :)

Not bad. But just a little bit of help: first of all men have very broad shoulders. When they lean their heads from one side to the other the top of their head should hit the edge of each shoulder. Women's shoulders are slightly inside if that. Also