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    igneouspiritfeonx

    Otaku Legend | Posted 02/16/08 | Reply

    I think her left arm (the one folded) shouldn't have as many lumps. I think I think it'd be better if it was a bit smoother. :] Take into account what the others suggested, and I think it'll look great. ^^ Good luck on the coloring! ^_^ ~~~Igneous

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    tokyokisshu

    Otaku Legend | Posted 02/16/08 | Reply

    This is pretty good~! Nice and simple. The proportions are a bit off but other than that i would really like to see it coloured. Good job! ^^

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    Mew Ichigo703

    Otakuite | Posted 02/12/08 | Reply

    X3 Thanks. I knew it looked a bit odd somewhere >.> Thanks again ^-^

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    mewmewpudding

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/12/08 | Reply

    Pretty cute. :] Her bathing suit on the left side (her left) looks a bit odd on the chest area. So fix that and work on the evil hands (how can people do those well?) and you'll do great. I'd like to see it colored.

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    Mew Ichigo703

    Otakuite | Posted 02/12/08 | Reply

    Btw people I kno I should work on the hands XD