alright; well ill tell you! mk, this is a outline drawing and i realize that but if you do want to make a manga id work on the shape of the head and details. try shading too :3 actually to me shading is the best part lol YOU GET TO USE TISSUES >DDD but hey im not a good drawer soo [haha my portfolio says it all] but im working on it! im working on realism too. but if you make a manga be sure to inform me deary; id love to see how it works out :D

If you guys dont like it you can tell me what to improve on and i'll work on it and i dont care if its really mean.. It would surly help.. everyones opinion maters to me!!!