This makes me want to cry. In a good way though. The poem is so great. Just amazing. I think you're a good writer. The negative effect really puts this piece into a whole other level, and it's a great level. This is just amazing...I can't think of any other good adjectives. Stunning. Breathtaking. Everything good. I really truly mean it :] You're awesome ♥ xoxoMUAH.