Thanks! ^_^ Yeah I really do need to fix my scanner :/ and I copied the expression a pic I found on the internet, I don't know what it is but it looked funny ^_^

Ok At this point i really can't tell at all, if its your scanner or your coloring. You should work on your coloring, my scanner never killed it that badly. so. yeah work on that. Her neck is really not right. I have problems with shoulders ^o^ so, give them a roundness to them. She looks, no offense, but her expression is retarted looking. Move her right eye over. and hmmm. what expression are you giving off to nana? scared? if its suprise or scared. you need to fix her eye brows to give that off, and fix her mouth. I love ELFIN Lied. You made her ears look like CAT ears, instead of horns, lets not forget that. ^o^ found her face a little more. Yeah tutorials would really help you out there with faces and bodies, and stuff. ^o^ It seems your switching eye styles based on the anime, choose an anime eye style you like, and keep on using it. Also, her hair is really good but, you want more hair on her head, thats to little hair, its like she's bald. Keep trying. You'll get it when you try hard enough. Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give up Live it, Learn it, Love it ^o^