Thank you RC! I'll be sure take a look that.

The outfit, the history,, the DNA, the name, everything like that is perfectly fine (of course, you already knew that since you ran her past me before), but your bodies still need work. The upper and lower arms should be the same length, as should the upper and lower legs. http://artistshospital.deviantart.com/art/Library-reference-Humans-24705651 I don't know if I linked you to them before, but it would be really good if you flipped through the guides in the artist's comments for that submission. They explain a lot about figure drawing and how the human body is set up and stuff.