i would only say not to make her neck too chubby, hm... guess only that ^-^ this pic rocks!! i do like it! Akatsuki Elite Member: Ichati

omg! I LOVE THE EYES,clothes,hair...THE WHOLE THING!! sorry i cant give u advice or u will suck lolbecuz i suck

how come drummer has never heard of you? well, ne who, i like it! the lineart is really realistic, as your title said. i think a step closer to realism would be, more face, less hair. the lineart could use just hint more....whu-BAM!! you know? try darkening it near the places where there are shadows and at the base of her hair buns! good luck, keep it up! .::Uramihcoro::.