Oh hey THIS is the first version? Because like, it's better than the second one except the shoulders are too wide and the waist is too skinny.

Isnt she zakuro?? looks like her..be more original

I really like the coloring and shading. ^^ However, like they have said, the proportions are a little off (I think the head is a little too small for the body) and she looks a lot like Zakuro. Although I don't really mind she looks that much like Zakuro if her personality is different.

The propotions are a bit off but it looks good. And you should do something totally origanal next time because she looks tooo much like Zakuro!

yea i agree with everyone.. she looks almost exactly like zakuro. i lie her though.... if u want i can design and outfit for u.. only if u want though

that is practically zakuro! ...io think u can b more origional than that... also her arms are alittle tiney bit wide 4 her body...but still keep trying

in MY opinion, she's alot CUTER than Mew Zakuro, not taht i have read tmm for like a year or two, but she has a much cuter face ^.^ i LOVE it!! especially the coloring, and i really like the coloirng in her hair!! SHINY!! ^.~

She'd look less like Zaukro if she had a more original outfit... just my opinion....

She looks exactly like Zakuro. Sorry to say it, but, you need to spice it up a bit.

I agree it does look a little too much like Zakuro. work a little more on ur proporsions, to make it even better. ~MyuKitsune~

I Beg To Differ!, If She Can Get Her Fan Charcters Into the Tokyo Mew Mew Section, Then Thats good!! --- Happy-chan, This Is Just Too Much Like Mew Mew Zakuro.. Maby, If You Want, Your Choice.. chnage Her Up A Bit! ;D ~Stevie

Woo!! so cuute :3 colors are super!!! xD

yea i know. but her personality is totally diff. still hope all yal like it! *Tenshi*

she looks like zakuro just a bit but it looks awesome! XD i like the coloring and i think you did a good job ^^