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    Lil Alphonse

    Otakuite | Posted 09/19/07 | Reply

    *agrees with angstyyouth* and maybe u can add more details, it'll look better

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    Otakuite | Posted 09/18/07 | Reply

    this is a pretty good. I like how you filled the whole picture with color. Feedback: The coloring is a little scratchy. When you are coloring something in, try not to show your pencils strokes. Try to make it as solid a color as possible. (and also try to go in one direction). Try to add a little shadow next time too. But this is still pretty good! votes