i think it's pretty good work...her hair, hands, dress and other are very good:)but her eyes are a little bit sad,as i see...but keep it on:)

I love that you are doing drawings in a series, I myself am trying, with characters from Tolkien's books, but this is for your art. I would really like to see your art in color! I think that your shading is very nice, and I like the details in the hair and the dress. The only thing I see may be that her anatomy is a little off. Good job.

I like her hands, such a simple, yet graceful pose. Yet, again, the shading is perfect. :D Lovin' the little wind insignia coming off of her dress and in the background.