Family portrait : adorable!!!!!!
Clothes:awesome! Story:GREAT!!!!!!

Oh wow. She had such a caring and luving family. So beautiful too. That's sad how it came to an end...

Yume is so cute as a little girl!!!Her mom is very pretty to.Such a sad story.LOVE the hair and kimonos!Plus whole picture.But anyway great pic. *votes&faves*

Ugh, I'm squirmong with jealousy! This is too beautiful!!!!! DX The color is amazing! And your story is insightful of Yume's past! Oooooh, I'm gonna fave this right away! X0

sniff sniff. Yume's story ish soo sad T-T kyuuu But the story ish totally awsome and so ish this piccie! ish really great!!! *votes and favs* Keep up the great work! ♥ Ookami-chan

D: so sad! :( Yume reminds me of Anastasia. Poor Yume! This looks amazing colored! Did you do it in photoshop? T.T I want photoshop...

hey that's so cool adding urself to one of ur favorite manga's i did that with naruto and lord of the rings:D

THIS IS SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! IT GOES PERFECTLY WITH U'RE MANGA!!! lol...like everyone else says...u should get it published...

~ The details are very beautiful! This must have taken you awhile colring....good job.

This is amazing! The colours are fantastic, and you can just feel the love and happiness radiating off of them. Its a shame it ended. However, there is just one little thing that Irks me. The story is great, expect one part: "because he had left the Tennsaiga a sword that could save 1000 lives back at his home" I'm sorry, but that just sounds lame to me. What stopped him from rushing back to said home and getting the sword? Yeah, good try, but it doesn't fit. Other then that however, its stunning. Keep it up!

Awsome shadings and colors. I really like their kimonos and the father's armour. Love this peace! Two thumbs up.*votes* and *fave*

they ALL look SO beautiful!! nice story!! poor her!! great design and outfits!! your VERY creative!! Akatsuki Elite Member: Ichati

T_T Darn it, Reeni, you're making me cry!!! This is a beautiful pic, and I thought it couldn't get any better fater I saw the lineart... *hugs Yume* T_T

hey, great work. ^__^. keept it up. *votes*

yay you colored it after all ^^ *votes*

beautiful art n great story

You know what i said on DA ;3!!! This is gold. And yeah with what StrawberryDaisy said about, you being able to visualize it. That's awsome. Wasn't it your friend agian who wrote this or you? ^^= Very nice! You have inspired me to also do a picture of Niyuki's parents as well!! ^-^ Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: NEVER give up Live it, Learn it, Love it ^^

The portrait is very good, the colors are nice as well, but the story, as good as it is, is pretty contradictory with the canonical one, but well that's what the joy of fanfiction is all about.

I love it It is ABSOLUTELY goregous! Great Job

i agree with StrawberryDaisy! i really could see the whole thing going on in my head! great story and pic! ^_~♥

this was beautiful asa outline and even more so in color your art is amazing !! and the sl and chars are beautiful keep it up

Oh wow this is soooo awesome! i lurv the pose and colours look great. i think its nice wen artists explain the meaning behind a pic....adds so much more depth to it xox

Oh this is absolutely beautiful, the clothes, the colours, the poses and the story! Excellent *votes*