This is really good for your first time drawing Yondamie. The coloring is pretty good. You need to work on getting all of the little white spots where there is suppose to be color. Don't worry I have problems with it too. And I serioulsy doubt that you noticed this but, the character that you have wearing balck is not Yondamie. He's Cluod Strife from Final Fanstay. Or either you did notice it and just tried to make Yondamie look like Cloud. It's an honest mistake. Either way this is really good for your first try. The line art is good. Like you said yourself they eye is a little off and, also you might need to work on his ear. Other than that this is very good. Hope to see more work from you and, I hope to see you improve with time. Have a great day! [j3:16]

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