Great job.
You forgot her pendant and w few other details, but it's still good.
Her chest seems a little awkward shaped, but maybe that's just me. (I assume you realize what part of the chest I'm talking about, rofl)
I love the soft coloring.
~momo y.
*whistles* For being a first time, that's pretty freakin' awesome. I like the way you colored it and drew her hair. Actually, I basically like everything you drew on this. XP
This is great!
It's hard to believe it's
your first try at Zakuro!
Truly beautiful!
The only thing that bothers
me is the puffy thing on
her left arm.
It seems too small.
No big deal though.
The coloring is really good!
Oh, and she has a fuzzy trim
on the top of her midriff.
Sorry if I'm being too picky!
Yaya-chan
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