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    Otakuite | Posted 08/25/07 | Reply

    'LoLperson101' that is incredibly rude and uncalled for. now, why dont we take a trip to kindergarden if you will.. 'if you dont have anything nice to say, then dont say anything at all' or do you not have the capacity of a four year old to grasp that concept? now, why dont YOU get a life and fuck off? =]

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/21/07 | Reply

    You're doing well, and TER is right, practice makes... well, better! (nobody's perfect, hehe =P ) Anyway, can't wait to see more of your art, it's cute! =] ~minto.

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    Otakuite+ | Posted 08/21/07 | Reply

    Aww! There So Cute! :D I Like Ichigo The Best! She Looks The Cutest!! I Have To Admit, I Agree With TheEmoRanger :D... You Should Listen To TheEmoRanger, Because I Think, From My Expericence, Gives Great advice :D

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    Otakuite | Posted 08/20/07 | Reply

    hmm. well i would say to you that you should work on your proportions... for example,either 1)their heads need to be smaller or, 2)their bodies need to be bigger make sure you sketch everything out first before you try to finish a picture, and allways triple check to make sure everything is balenced also, take your time while inking your picture. i can see in many spots where the line stops and continues overlapped. your picture could use more shading. also where it looks like a colored pencil was used, you need to move the pencil in one, constant direction to give a more even, less rough texture. sooo basically, keep practicing. you have alot of potential and i hope to see more from you. -TER