To be completely honest, it needs better proportions. The shoulders are really too a big and broad and chest are big and too close together. Collar bone needs to be a little lower and shallow or shadowed. The face, eyes, and the hair is okay. It's not horribly bad. It's okay. SyneeBelle.

WOW this one is GREAT! I love the hair and her face is well done but *ur prolly tired of critisizing u by now* u should put her left shoulder more rounded since its farther. **Kiyo-chan** p.s. srry if u annoyed u i just wanted to see all ur characters! i went backwords ,so the first u subbmitted id the last i saw ,right now* U made interesting characters!i wanna see how the story goes!