I just thought I should comment on this picture. First of all,the head is very unproportionate to the body. the head is too far over to the left side. Her arms are somewhat too wide,they need to be thinner for her bodytype. The lineart should be cleaner,and she looks pale as a ghost o.0 The bubbles...they don't look like bubbles. I really like the pose but remember shading needs to be more prominent. keep up the nice work. TER

Well the whole point of Giving critsism is to point out mistakes that you might not have seen. Cute drawing though. I like the pose.

I'm Sorry But I'd have To Disagree.... I Don't see anything wrong. O_o

Very good! I like it! The only thing I think needs fixed is her head. It looks a tad to small. Other than that, it looks good.

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