well in the game her waist is like that- im pretty faithful

make the waist a bit wider, the face and neck a bit more proportional to the rest of the body, and a bit more work on the arm holding the helmet. Otherwise, it's good.

lol goo, JJ head abit big there? the nose i've never seen drawn like that o.o.'Goo' job Jj.

i like it but i think it would look better if the eyes were set a bit higher! Keep up the good job!

Very cool style~