LoLperson101

Otakuite | Posted 08/22/07 | Reply

That is the ugliest picture in the whole world. Is that supposed to be a girl. It looks like a guy. Get a LIFE
Mizuki-Air

Otakuite++ | Posted 08/11/07 | Reply

I re-drew her and I did fix the body, I'm hoping to get it up here soon. Thanks for the suggestions everyone!!
tsunadeichigo10

Otakuite+ | Posted 08/11/07 | Reply

I agree with both of them, she needs to be alittle curvier... and again A BIGGER HEAD. Try making her alittle shorter. What type of animal is she? And why does she have wings if it's a wolf? Even though you do the faces great, the bodies need alittle work, ok? =) ~Nina-chan
MewKittyCatChan54

Senior Otaku | Posted 08/10/07 | Reply

wow its good for your first time! i like her outfit! ^^ its really cute! her weapon is cute too ^^ i agree with what emptyhead-chan said though maybe you could look at a picture to get the curves down a bit better ^^ great work tough! i hope to see more from you! keep up the hard work! love ya! ~sammy
Mizuki-Air

Otakuite++ | Posted 08/10/07 | Reply

Thank you for the tip. This was my first try so it wasn't the best. I might try drawing her again with a better figure.
emptyHEAD84

Otaku Legend | Posted 08/09/07 | Reply

ok, well... i would start off by giveng her a more feminine figure. when drawing any female figure the curves should be soft and flowing. but lol if i keep talking itll be a long comment XD so message me if you want any help k? ^-^