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    xrogue kitsunex

    Otakuite++ | Posted 08/04/07 | Reply

    wow great pic! just minor color details.. but awesome job! ^_^

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    caosgoth

    CAOS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/03/07 | Reply

    i see you have a rough colouring, but it looks fine ^-^ nice! Akatsuki Elite Member: Ichati

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    Otaku Legend | Posted 08/03/07 | Reply

    Very nice! I would have t osay your weak point is coloring. Also, thank you for the comment.

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    gaara210ai

    Grand Otaku | Posted 08/02/07 | Reply

    oh how cool! it's good for a first attempt!!! you have the same problem i do it looks like. (really shaky lines) hmm.. don't really konw how to fix that though. i suggest working on coloring and your pictures will look a lot better ^_^

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    john3:16

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/02/07 | Reply

    I like this alot, but you should really try working on your coloring. You pretty much have the lineart down...but yeah. Just try to color in one solid direction, and then once you have that certain area colored nicely try coloring in the other direction. Trust me it'll come out pretty good. Also you might want to try to clean up your lines before submitting anything, more people tend to look at your work the cleaner it is.I really do like this though. You made Naruto look pretty kool, and I can tell you tried really hard on this. Your quite a good artist.^^ Have a good day!! [j3:16]

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    Neko.Lover

    Senior Otaku | Posted 08/02/07 | Reply

    O this is really good, great job! I think you're getting better! Awesomeness! =^.^=