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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/06/07 | Reply

    I disagree with Crimson. Personally, I feel that someone may like the lyrics and steal them for themselves. There are mean people out there. =[ Anyhoo, cute art. Next time, draw on blank paper; lined paper = lower quality pic. ~minto.

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    Otakuite | Posted 07/05/07 | Reply

    I think its good! but Crimson-chan is right

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 07/05/07 | Reply

    This is cool! I like it! The bottom of the dress needs some wrinkles, and it needs to flow more. And, if her dress is flowing her hair should be too, like wind. Next time you should ink the words so we can read them better. :) Overall you did a good job! ~Katie