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    HaganeNoKokoro

    Otakuite | Posted 07/23/07 | Reply

    I have to agree with fierspirit...it is pretty unkempt.

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    fierspirit

    Senior Otaku+ | Posted 06/20/07 | Reply

    all i can say to improve is clean up the lines, it is a little sloppy.