Not a bad job by any means, but it does have a few sensitive spots. First, the face- it seemed as if you were a tad afraid to bring it out. If you don't think you have the ability to bring it out, that's okay- just practice, practice, practice. Secondly, the shading on the hair almost pales in comparison to the wonderful shading on the rest of the drawing- I know that you can do it, because of the good job on the clothing. A solid effort. Keep drawing! ^ ^

Astrael Rose

Kurai Nakigo